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DA why aren't you showing the PDF VIEWER //screamsssss :iconheadslamplz:
I give up, just download the pdf to read ppl!






For :iconaerobrake:'s Revelations Event

“Why am I drawing a paradise on this old wall?
Why do I prefer a distant dream to eternity?
My heart is searching somewhere
For wings that were put to sleep...
Wings that I must not lose...

'Why am I the only one who gets hurt?', I sigh...
People are all just mismatched pieces.
The future isn't just places
That are decided for me...
There's a road illuminated by light...”
~Trax’s Blaze Away



:iconmilly-fox::iconmilly-fox::iconmilly-fox::iconmilly-fox: I'm done finally! :iconcryforever: AMG trying to pull out another comic, one right after another is a pain, and kills lots of my free time. :icony-u-notearplz: But still has art to finish... why CL....why groups you suddenly throw deadlines at me.... I'm so low on energy...I just did a comic for VT, and now AB, and then has to work on CL.... I just--:iconfliptable:

Anyhow excuse me for drawing really sloppy sketches, I don't have the energy/motivation to re-line all the panels, as I need to save some for the other group art I have to finish... And sorry for stealing OCs, feels awkward drawing and putting together OCs I never rp'ed with... like only rp'ed with Alex and Trix... so yeah... forgive me they are OOC and have been butchered by my drawing skills. :iconweepplz: But I don't think you guys don't mind right... //shot/ But tried to put the comic in pdf format this time, because if I put it in strips like usual, it'd be like 7 strips long-- and I really don't want to resize and cram them all in one image, or upload 7 separate images.... Plus I think this way, you guys can actually read the comic without squinting... lol

But anyways, as probably you can tell, I referenced a lot from Air Gear and the Breaker for some of the action poses, but there are some poses I referenced from dA as well. I'm slightly disappointed as I couldn't make this comic really action-y and crazy, but since I've never seen any of OCs fight, except Alex, I have nothing to base on, and reading bios doesn't really help me picture any fight scenes so had to guess and use moves and tricks from Air Gear, since IDK...But if it feels like Kotose is slightly OP that's because it's easier to picture her fight than trying to imagine the other characters fighting //wheeze/

So since I was stumped on lots of the action scenes, and the story didn't flow that well, added some feels. Like seriously Kotose has no chance facing two kings at once, so it was all about getting from the high point and into the low point... but it's too bad I had to sado Kotose, since lately it looks like I've been doing that to my characters as of late.... However it's kind of is confusing from Kotose's POV, as her thoughts aren't exactly normal or the nicest...So probably should explain that...//wheeze/
For some insight: So basically, Kotose thrives and lives her life to be unique, special, and different. However Vehemence suggests equality among everyone. But from Kotose's perspective, being on the same level as everyone is the same as being dirt, which is what she hates the most, so the main reason she continues being a storm rider is to show that she's individualistic and has value... she's a rebel kind of-- Willing to do almost anything to achieve her goals and ambitions, even it means killing/harming others/herself. Also it is due to this mindset and her stuck-up personality that she is a character that easily clashes with others, easily misunderstood by others as being a crazy, messed-up individual with an almost warped way of thinking. Despite the way she acts though, she thinks in pretty realistic terms, believing that only the fittest should survive, and those who lose are seen as trash. Regardless though rather than letting others control her life, she'd rather die... which is why she destroys her own legs and AT's..... //hackcoughcough.extremely.high.internal.locus.of.control

Probably one of the most difficult things to draw besides the action scenes, were the AT's though I scribbled all of them because lol I give up seriously, fails at drawing the sky regalia with all that detail. Another is trying to draw bubbles, like I usually paint them with no lines, so yeah it's really awkward looking drawing them... But yeah the water and the blood were the fun parts...

For some clarification: There are flashbacks, I think you guys can distinguish those... and Kotose basically destroyed her legs and broke her AT's in the end, and those AT's are beyond repairable... so yeah she needs some new rad shoes... If she's dead or alive, :iconmysteryplz::iconmystery2plz: let's hope it's the latter... :icondivaplz: lol


Thank you for reading~ //flees to color CL art :iconfabbplz:






Kotose Nakamura & Art & Story © :iconrumbl3fish:
Alexis Du Pointe © :iconbriicheese:
Ryuu De Luca © :iconxeddietan:
Yukiko Inaba © :iconkiwikayli:
Trix © :iconcuttles:
Zig © :icontoxic-zone:
Topsy/Tadi © :iconasphyxiion:
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:iconamikotochan:
amikotochan Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amg this is AMAZING!! *A* Kotose~<3
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:iconrumbyfishy:
RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you think so~ Thank you, Amiko~
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amikotochan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome~ X3
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ZiaLiaLis Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013

HOWLS RUMBLE THIS IS SO AMAZING AAAHHHH Kotose you lovely person :iconhnnghplz:

THIS IS REALLY GREAT K :iconclappingplz:

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RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THANKS ZIA //wheezes
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ZiaLiaLis Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
:iconloveloveplz: YOU'RE WELCOME ///
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briioche Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
YELLS EVERYEHRHHWHEHHRHT !!!!!!!!!!
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RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
//YELLS WITH YOUUU :icontonguewhipplz:
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briioche Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
SCRAAAAAAMAIOGIDISDFG

WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME THIS EXISTED YELLS GROSSLY AND SMOOCHES ALL OVER YOU
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RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I FORGOT OK- :iconweepplz:
Thanks for the love though~
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toxic-zone Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
AHHHHH TRAX SOBS someonestillrememberthemLOL omg the file is so heavy though SOBS BUT IT'S SO PRETTY AND OMG SO MUCH EFFORT THAT'S SO HNGHGHJG when we are lazing so much with 4 pages of comic with cuttles :icongtthplz: so embarrassing. GOOD JOB! :iconkissforeheadplz:
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RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it~
You should've seen my doc file, it was 81mb... so outrageously huge... :iconlazepoolplz: BUT TY, I TRIED REALLY HARD, really wants to rank up lol.... though if I had more time, like a month or so, I could probably colored it as well...//wheeze/ But 4 pages is a lot, and I bet those 4 pages will turn out beautiful~ :iconfabbplz:
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AzureBlaxis Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013   General Artist
//waits to get home omg
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:iconrumbyfishy:
RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Go home already lol >.<"
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:iconazureblaxis:
AzureBlaxis Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013   General Artist
I JUST DID
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:iconrumbyfishy:
RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good :iconmingplz:
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wishing-aria Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
//sobs
omg that was so beautiful ; v;
lajsdlajs
I love Kotose, her personality is just so :iconasdfghplz:
And your sketches are just so awesome ; v; and the paneling and everything //wheeze
I love it so much~

and yeah the flashbacks were clear, to me anyway~
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RumbyFishy Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, hearing compliments means a lot to me~ :icontearplz:
I'm glad you like her personality, but she has too much sass in her, and she's so mean... :iconweepplz:

Ah good, I was worried if they'd make sense or not, since it's not a comic strip, so the panels are broken up in odd places... >.<"
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